3 Comments

  • Posted April 28, 2010

    JoJo Tabares

    I like this!

  • Posted April 28, 2010

    Kim

    I do too, JoJo! It’s a great reminder that descriptive writing should show rather than tell.

  • Posted April 28, 2010

    amy in peru

    ahhh. love it.

    amy in peru

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